Poem -
I Fainted
" Into Your Heart "
I fainted into your heart,
And thy blood gave me life to live on,
I felt the soft waves of fading emotions,
Gave me reasons to forsake all resolutions,
Because your love for me, now i know,
Is bound for eternity in thy forgiving soul.
And please, let me not rest alone,
for the warmth of love, is to embrace in our souls.
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Comments
Lovely first line one which sets the tone for the remainder of your beautiful poem. I notice you have added some lines onto the original version I first read. I love now that you finish with souls but, and forgive me for saying this, I am not sure about love in brackets. I don't think you need it. Just my opinion - sorry.
Thank you,
so much,
Sir. Bernie Martin,
I was contemplating those brackets,
But now, I will remove it,
Again,
Thank you,
You are very welcome.