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I GOT YOU POEM

I GOT YOU POEM

                                        chorus

They said i should write poem 
They gave me title and i said
 
It's out my zone they said that can't
Be ture i know what i can do
 
And now sit here thinking of a poem
And it just came to me
 
         I got you poem
          I got you poem 

I can write about flowers in spring
And how the birds sing and the bells ring.

                I got you poem
                I got you poem

I could write about love and money
That i dont have, 
                     I got you poem
                     I got you poem

And when it was done i told 
Them it was a song they took
 
A  long look and read it slow
 
And came to me and said
  
It's same old poem as always
 
             I got you poem
             I got you poem.
 

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Gwendoline

Greg, your post put the song “I got you babe” by sunny and Cher in my head 🙃 thanks for the happy vibe. When it comes to poetry I always say go with your own flow and stay true to yourself. Your poems are always a lovely read x

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Greg Etsell

I wrote it because I couldn’t think of anything else to write and this game to me

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Greg Etsell

Thank you maybe you’re right maybe I should take it down I have been listening to that song too much

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Gwendoline

Never take a poem down greg. This is something that marks a moment in your creative thinking. It is a good piece, got me thinking x 

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Neville

Another smashing poem Gregg .. I wonder if you are like me .. always keep a note pad close by and jot down ideas as they come along .. I like your formatting too sir :) 

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Greg Etsell

Yes I do I have a notepad notebooks that a first write my poems on that as a rough draft
add to that I may put it up here but also if I hear a word or a a sentence of praise I’ll write that down  if I am Watching a show
and I hear a word that I like write it down or if I’m out and about and I see something it comes to mind as a poem come home and write it down and I don’t know if you’re like me that 24/7 Thinking of something to write wake up mid of the night and something might come to you you do you hold onto that thought never take a note pad to bed if it happens in the middle of the night just go ride it down where I have my notepad

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Neville

blimey, why am I not surprised .. we could be twins ............. N :)

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Greg Etsell

Well maybe but I think
Every writer in here 
is like that and
all writers in 
the world 
maybe like that
its way life 
for us It
is are life

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Neville

I think you are write Greg :)

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Neville

I came back here because I just couldn't get the tune these words carry with them out of my head .. it must surely be one of the catchiest poems on the web ....... N :)

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Neville 
i’m so pleased that you love this poem
if you would go and listen to the song I got you babe by Sonny and Cher you know where I got this poem 

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Neville

That's it .. You got me babe by Sonny & Cher .. Sheeeesh, isn't it funny, I had been trying to put my finger on it all week and then suddenly bingo ... thanks Greg .. Hopefully I shall rest easy now .. Have a swell Sunday my friend .. its cold but sunny here in my little bit of England ...................... Neville :)
 

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