i hate you

I
A person of interest with the voice of a tiger, a person of strength with the heart of a fighter. A person who is determine and can see through you, no matter who you are or no matter what you do.
Hate
Something you see as you try to know life, they always want to see you fall without a trace remain in sight.This is a mutual feeling between you and i a feeling called hatred that's hard to describe. A feeling of agony that can drive any man mad, so why do we hate? is life that bad.
You
You are a person of many different forms, you come as a hater present in my norm. Your hard to figure out, that's a very hard task but why do i hate you ? i just had to ask.Its like no matter what you say or no matter what you do, its like i will always hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hello Jellian,
Wow!!! Very strong poem and for I am sure, very strong reasons,
for it, are attached.
I really like the way you separated each stanza, depicted by and representing
the single word heading, in each stanza. I posted one similar to
this set up but for the opposite reasons....Very lyrical and filled with
pure fed up emotions, full of hurt and mishandled trust by the
subject of your poem, to the deliver...Stand for that which you believe
and allow no one to twist, contort, misconstrue nor attempt to
prove that which is (right), into that which carries no basis or substance (wrong), better known to those that practice this style of relating to another.......As always Jellian, figuratively speaking,"stick to your guns."Strong will and not afraid to speak out on your own behalf, woman."
Powerful poem,
Jim
thank u jim. coming from u i really appreciate it trust me.