Poem -
I havent tried death
I thought I liked pets
until its 3 am
on a school night
and the cat won't stop
scratching
I thought I liked drinking
until its midnight
and the room is spinning
and that guy won't stop
staring
I thought I liked driving
Until its 10pm
and its icy
and the snow won't stop
falling
I thought I liked showers
until its day
and I'm bleeding
and my cuts wont stop
stinging
I thought I liked you
until it's the morning
and my stomachs sick
and I won't stop
crying
and I thought I liked life
until I remember
I haven't tried
death.
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clever poet! I like your mysterious 'twist' at the end, Melissa
Wow!!.... been there!!......I LOVE the way you formatted this.... added a powerful, delivery, to its already insightful message....... This is a striking piece....... covering intense subject matter with a soft understanding of its intent....... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!...... and ......WELCOME to COSMO MELISSA!!......... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
loved it simply as that I LOVED IT
Bravo! Very clever