I humbly confess
I humbly confess that I am bound to this life of uncerntainties
Leave me in a room alone with my miseries
I'm hurting inside
Inside I have died
Register me as crazy
Go ahead and...blame me
Gutter found, gutter bound
The gutter now
Now I lay me down to sleep
Weaken and beat
Visualize my pain
Visualize every time my tears came
I had no chance
I was doomed at first glance
And they wondered why
They wonder why I refuse to apologize
They wonder why I lost hope
They wonder why I'm lost in dope
They refused to believe me
So I figured life don't need me
I've failed with it
Went to jail with it
Now I'm back where they found me
When they get scared just to be around me
Non trustable
An evil that's so non lustable
Through my eyes you see my demise
And through my tears, its my heart that cries
Trapped in this lifestyle, addicted to the mess
I humbly confess!
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Well thank you so much. :)
Powerful food for thought. :) great write. Well done.
brilliant x
i feel sad at this one like you are feeling deep emotions of the past in the present time or it might be you are just one hell of a great poet that draws us into the emotions with you either way you have outdone yourself with another great one all the best tina x
Tina... thank you homie lol this poem has nothing to do with me personally but slightly about a friend of mine. I always put myself mentally in the situation that i am writing about and let my mind and pen work... i feel the pain because i put myself there, if that makes sense.
try it. think about a homeless man on the streets ok? now close your eyes and put yourself in his shoes and think about his life, what may have got him there, his feelings and just write... try it lol
thanks again for your loyalty and support
lol i tried that few days ago on "penny for my thoughts", homeless man. a bit of practice lol thanx morris tina x
hey Morris
love the content ..the rhyme..and everything..!
simply awesome..:)
regards
Surabhi
Thank you all
What up Morris,
All i have to say player, is that the image itself speaks the true heart of the poem and you simply flowed right along with it without missing one beat.Job well done, just as all the rest. Gravitated to these lines...
Now I'm back where they found me
When they get scared just to be around me
Non trustable
An evil that's so non lustable
Through my eyes you see my demise
And through my tears, its my heart that cries
Later,
Jim
Jim.. I am always thankful when you comment on one of my poems. How have you been?
Greetings (Bro)Morris,
Well my friend and hope that you have been found in the same, if not better situations.I am thankful to be able to read such powerful poems,always able to feel the full effect of your heart in yours Morris...A man of serious measures but takes the time to expel his heart to all and always for all.......You are as amazing as your poems my friend....
God Speed,
Jim