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I know theres something wrong

i know theres something wrong
When I look in the mirror
Because instead rotting flesh falling to ground
I find a girl, she looks normal
Normal looking isn't enough

I know theres something wrong because when I walk through the halls I can hear screaming
Though I can't hear words
Just screams
it can't stopĀ 
It won't stop

I know theres something wrong because when I open my phone
And look for a game
All can see
Are the terrible words
flooding the screen
why are you still hereĀ 

I know theres something because when I smile at a certain person
They smile back , not a fake smile
Or a taunting smile
That all the other shadows cast
But real
i trust youĀ 

i know that somethings wrong because when I go to sleep
All I can see are thousands of menacing crows
Tearing at my insides
Tearing my heart apart
Ā Ā  i loved you
Ā 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! PINE GOD!!....this was a VERY compellingly disturbing read!!....don't get me wrong...I liked it.....but.....I found it a little twisted and THAT...for me......is MORE than interesting....It's like a cross between Edgar Allen Poe and Sylvia Plath!!.....VERY DARK & VERY well crafted!!....the formatting drives the flow beautifully....and the repetition of the title line works perfectly!!......ALL STARS!!.....cool stuff!!......well done dear poet sister!!........T xo ???? ~ Bravo!! ?✓?

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