Poem -
I never thought I'd see myself die
I never thought I'd see myself die,
But in a world of endless possibilities,
The impossible happened,
I watched the light in my eyes slowly fade with time,
Once a whirl of rich blues now a hazy grey,
Dull,
A laugh that filled the room suddenly became the silence,
Surrounding you with nothingness,
Empty,
Those long nights with close friends,
Laughter and smiles,
A distant memory,
These nights become filled with sadness and hurt,
A hug from your pillow,
Wiped eyes on your shirt,
I never thought I'd see myself die,
But I've watched for years as I slowly faded away,
I wish I was still her.
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Comments
Hi JESSICA,
Wow!! This is intense......I can tell you've put a LOT of thought and contemplation into this subject matter......you've certainly captured a VERY compelling and dark piece of the poetic here.....with powerfully memorable phrasing that helps drive it into the readers minds eye!! ~
~ "These nights become filled
With sadness and hurt
A hug from your pillow
Wiped eyes on your shirt
I never thought I'd see myself die..."
ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....good work dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
The old one died and then a new one is born. Nicely penned.
Such an interesting write Jessica, thoroughly enjoyed the read...hugs ??