Poem -
I sank
Like 3 Pin it 0Her bulbous shape slid into the water
a mask of monstrosities
hide her physiognomiesMakeup thick as plaster
gold jewellery
thick red rimmed plastic glasses
mascara...Her perfume dissipates over the rippled surface
like a pyroplastic flow
a Krakatoa of the 21st century
an unnatural disasterMeanwhile I'm
gliding like a whale shark
the air is hot and damp
I filter out a stray pube
her musk catches me off guard..
At that moment I ungracefully
spluttered...
Then sank
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Comments
Thoroughly enjoyed this Syd well done :-)
Thank you Simon. Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for reading and leaving feed back.
Appreciated - Syd
Big Smiles from here SYD!!......you are so friggin' creative ~
~ "A Krakatoa of the 21st Century
An unnatural disaster..."
The imagery you've created here is unforgettable dear poet brother!!...... Absolutely Love it!!........ALL STARS!!..... thank you so much for sharing this gem my friend!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ?✴❤✴?
Thank you for your continued feedback Tony. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I rarely have time to post and read others poems on Cosmo lately. I appreciate you taking the time to do so.
Much appreciated.
Love and rockets also - Syd xo
Syd, I had to read this a couple of times, it's very descriptive, especially that stray pube, I can't stop laughing, I had to read it to my wife
Her response
"Men"
Ha ha! Thank you Gerard. I'm glad your wife found it amusing. Thanks for reading, I appreciate your feedback.
Cheers - Syd