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I say Eureka! 

I say Eureka! 

How I wish you were right 
With your prescriptions and lab-coats white 
A case of delusion, madness, or derangement 
How easy it’d be, if it were all an illusion 
Or a mere spell of sadness, depressive disengagement 

When I now see clearly, you call me “blind”
Enlightened, really, “a broken mind”
Revelations and prophecies, “a fool’s inanity”

You say insanity 
I say Eureka!

You think I’m a freak, huh? 
In need of your critique, huh? 
See what I see, why dontcha?
You’d go mad after a peek, I betcha!
Screaming from demons out to getcha! 
Now look who’s the freak, huh?

You say insane,
I say the rest of you are!
Though to see what I see, unable to explain 
I guess anybody would go insane 
For all of you, still calling yourself sane
I won’t break your spell 
And whisk you away to this hell 
I’ll be the demented and bizarre 
And never tell 

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Tony Taylor

Wow SG!!....I Love the wordplay that you have created here.....all the "dontcha's betcha's, & getcha's" that are so hard to rhyme normally.....you do a VERY creative thing with those phrasings.....with ~ "freak, huh?" & "critique, huh?".....just VERY clever stuff dear poet sister!!....and your overall intent is conveyed beautifully.......I'd say you summed it up pretty well with ~ "Depressive disengagement"......challenging the status quo is something you do VERY well SG!!.......ALL STARS!!......well conceived and VERY well delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  : )

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Sad Girl

That warms my heart, thank you so much as usual for your kind words xo :)

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