I say Eureka!Â

How I wish you were rightÂ
With your prescriptions and lab-coats whiteÂ
A case of delusion, madness, or derangementÂ
How easy it’d be, if it were all an illusionÂ
Or a mere spell of sadness, depressive disengagementÂ
When I now see clearly, you call me “blind”
Enlightened, really, “a broken mind”
Revelations and prophecies, “a fool’s inanity”
You say insanityÂ
I say Eureka!
You think I’m a freak, huh?Â
In need of your critique, huh?Â
See what I see, why dontcha?
You’d go mad after a peek, I betcha!
Screaming from demons out to getcha!Â
Now look who’s the freak, huh?
You say insane,
I say the rest of you are!
Though to see what I see, unable to explainÂ
I guess anybody would go insaneÂ
For all of you, still calling yourself sane
I won’t break your spellÂ
And whisk you away to this hellÂ
I’ll be the demented and bizarreÂ
And never tellÂ

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Comments
Wow SG!!....I Love the wordplay that you have created here.....all the "dontcha's betcha's, & getcha's" that are so hard to rhyme normally.....you do a VERY creative thing with those phrasings.....with ~ "freak, huh?" & "critique, huh?".....just VERY clever stuff dear poet sister!!....and your overall intent is conveyed beautifully.......I'd say you summed it up pretty well with ~ "Depressive disengagement"......challenging the status quo is something you do VERY well SG!!.......ALL STARS!!......well conceived and VERY well delivered!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
That warms my heart, thank you so much as usual for your kind words xo :)