I surrender!
Hidden secrets never to be told
Depths of black roses entwine our souls
Dark knight and his mistress
Game of thrones for king and glory
Midnight feast upon our souls
Divinity captures but for a moment
Our tomb in the night-time lust
Glimmers in the shadow of intertwined candles
Dripping its carnal wax
Hypnotic touches embedded on our hearts
Silk sheets and forsaken world
You rode the wind faster than the source of light
Ravish with Insatiable , inevitable feeding ,
In this tower of guilty pleasure
No virtuous night
From my volatile knight
As dawn approaches his vampire trance on me evaporates
Now my soul awaits our robust interaction
From dust to lust you my dark knight will rise
Again and again -forever injecting this dark pleasure
Upon my sweet -tasting flesh
Come rise ! I surrender !
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Comments
Excellent write, Tina Moore, Thanks for sharing
The above lines are superb. Congrats & Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Williams JI Maveli tina x
Tina this is filled with beautiful rich description expressions of hope for
The dark knight!! Love it!!
Best wishes Jai :)
Jai thanx - just a deep dream of a knight -not so much in shining armor but the opposite lol more interesting. thank you tina x
Wonderful piece !
Thanks Richard - im so glad you enjoyed! tina x
Always good to read your work...
Morris my friend thank you - glad you like this piece -dream lol tina x
Superb imagery! I love darker themed poetry and this is one of the best I've read on here! :) A profound description of temptation congrats!
Thank you very much Stephen ,dark ,light and everything i try to do my best ,but have to admit these pieces i like more too. :) tina x
Tina- I JUST LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats
Nancy
Nancy thanks a mill... lol i had fun with this one ..love the deep side too. thank you :)
OMG!
I wrote a poem about Vampires and I check out your latest and I find the same.
dashavoo
Looks like we have the same flavour of writing chris lol...gonna check yours now ... :) Tina x
Tina Moore,
Congrats on your winning nomination,
Regards, WILLIAMSJI
Thank you WilliamsJl I always appreciate your input :) Tina x
I love the mysteriousness of this Tina...Fantastic write...x:)
Thanks Carey -much appreciated :) Tina x