Poem -
I TOOK A WALK
I took a walk in the calm of the evening
I felt the wind toussel my hair
I heard the waves of the ocean crashing
I left behind every sorrow and care
IÂ felt the sand squish between my toes
I filled my lungs with the salty air
I took a walk in the calm of the evening
I came to find you, but you weren't there
You walk along the shores of heaven
You left behind every sorrow and care
I took a walk in the calm of the evening
Hoping one last time, to see you there
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Dear Poet Sister GAYLE!!.....this is a perfect piece......creating the perfect ambiance for reflecting on the passing of a loved one.....,great phrasing, timing, and tone.....Loved it my friend!!....,ALL STARS!! PINNED!!......high fives girlfriend!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?âłâ´â
Thank you Tony, I am so happy you enjoyed it! You always enlighten and brighten my day!
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My Dear Gayle,
In the moonlight by the ocean
I walk to see your face
But every night my heart breaks
Because of you, there is no trace
For you walk by the Sea of Serenity
On Heaven's Blessed shore
Leaving the footprints of an Angel
Waiting for me one day there soar
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Really excellent write Larry, I always enjoy your beautiful poetry. Thank you!