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I WILL MISS YOU

I WILL MISS YOU

I'm really sorry that you don't believe in Heaven...

I really was looking forward to being there with you when it's our time to go...

I really want to be in the presence of all the beautiful Angels...

​​​​​​You would have looked so beautiful there, I know...

The things we could have done, the things we could have seen...

I know it's real because, I saw my beautiful Mom...

I told her all about you and I told her I probably wouldn't have you because you don't want to go...

I told her that I needed all the help I could get...

The thing I must always remember is I tried my best...

Heaven's crying tears and I don't know what to do...

I can't make you go...

​​​​​​I will miss you...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Richard Waters

A mournful approach increases the power of this work. Its profound undertone gives it weight and authority without hampering the desired message.
Thanks for sharing.Β  :)

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Halo Pain

Very thoughtful. A deep poem well written.

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lodigiana

Sad but very touching and beautiful....you have created a real feeling of loss and longing..nice one Sparrowsong β™₯
Lodigiana xx

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sparrowsong

Hello Romeo...

It's what I was trying to achieve...

Thank you for letting me that's how it was received...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Best wishes and blessings!

Hugs! :)

sparrowsong

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John DeFoore Jr

It is painful when someone we care about makes a decision not to believe.
Well said clear and a heart stirring write.
Thanks you for the chance to read the piece.
JohnΒ 

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sparrowsong

Hello Halo...

Thank you very much for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Tina...

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Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your very sweet and kind comment my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

​​The death journey is one we will all take...

The commonality of all in birth...

​​​​​Heaven is denied by many and I wouldn't deny such a beautiful place...

Heaven would seem more beautiful if my Dear friends were there, too...

​Many People don't believe God's real so they won't believe in His promises...

I still don't understand how creation came to be from nothing if it wasn't created by God...

I have nothing to lose and yet, I have everything to lose, I will have everything according to His riches and glory of Heaven...

Through the only one who can save us...

Only through the Blood of God's only Son can we be healed...

To be able to reign with Him for 1,000 Years...

His eye is always on the Sparrow...

I still don't understand also, all the Prophesy that's in the Bible and things are happening faster and faster and those that continually say they don't believe and we're the fool...

You can lead a Horse to water but, you can't make him drink...

Thank you for your sweet, and kind comment and support...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello L. Barto...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you very much my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello John...

You're absolutely right...

My Dad disowned me because, I wouldn't agree with his ideas...

He didn't believe in God and I converted from my Mother's Religion and that was it...

He kicked me out of his house and I left...

I believed the same as my Mother but, I made sure she got to stay it was her house too...

I always made sure she knew where I was as soon as I could so she'd always know how to reach me if she needed me...

A few years before they died I bought a House with my Mother while my Dad went away...

He came back so I let them have the House it was better that way...

A few years later she died and He followed in Death 2 months later...

I gave the House to my Son...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

We're a work in progress my friend!

I didn't know there was such a thing as perfect faith...

Sounds like you have more than that of the size of a mustard seed...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

It's a something...

It's not a nothing...

Look at the power of a whole atom...

?

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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