Ice
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A burst of ice fills my skin
Falling, falling, deep within
Blurry images cross my sight
As I watch with all my might
As my breath passes by
My life, it flashes before mine eye
I shiver slightly, my skin so cold
Shoulders blue, with pain untold
Like a rock, down and down
With no smile, no crown, no life, so drown
My skin damp, my heart ice
Sinking like a grain of rice
The path is hard
Though I could try
But in the end,
I might just die
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Comments
Sad piece but profound. Well done ?
Thank you ?
I really liked this piece... it made me feel like I was plunging into the depths of the sea. A coldly brilliant poem. Love your work!
Thanks! I'm glad you read my poem. You obviously really understood the meaning of my poem
excellent a great read. crybaby , take care and keep up the good work, rock
You too :)
CryBaby,. Welcome to Cosmo and congrats on this nice piece of work. I like it. Good Luck! Terry Kay
Thanks so much :)