Idk
I was living in a dream
not mine but yours
buying hopeÂ
that you already sold
you said you loved me
but you spoke with a silent mouth
i gave up everything
just for you to head out
backed me in a corner
and still I still fight
nights I can’t sleep waitingÂ
for you to be at my door banging at night
just to say sorry
and prove what you really said
mean while I feel empty
the glass ain’t half full
its half drank
my mine so tired
my thoughts is on speed
my stomach keep growling
i keep crying I can’t eat
words can’t express how I feel right now
if life had a bookÂ
I’d buy them all out
Fighting for my life
fighting for my kid
fighting for the love
that your brokeÂ
and you never fixed
going to work every day
smiling in people’s face
but when I get homeÂ
emptiness is what’s on replayÂ
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Some intertwining structure in this that keeps me going back to read over it once more. A really torn and broken feeling in this one. Your emotions really bleed through. Heartfelt Deja... I hope you are ok
Wow some heavy lines in this write. Pulled in from the start. This leaves the reader with an aching heart. Some great rhyming structure within your words.
“if life had a bookÂ
I’d buy them all out
Fighting for my life
fighting for my kid
fighting for the love
that your broke”
This just screams anguish and there is a real sense of emptiness by the endÂ
Thanks for sharingÂ
Gwen :)