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If you knew

If you knew

If you knew the consequences for me  would you have done it
If you had not done it to me I would  have been another girl 
If you seen me now would you have still done it 

Will you ever understand your actions made me go from  feeling like a fearless cheater catching its lunch to a weak helpless chick 
Will you ever truly understand it's not just me this has effected 
If you knew the consequences would you still have done it now   

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Christopher Correia

Lizzy, I would only be 'guessing' but I do believe I understand this poem, it seems directed at a specific person or scenario perhaps, anyway it is very well written, you pulled me into the narrative easily, enjoyed, cheers poet, very creative

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