Poem -

If You Never Let Me Go

If You Never Let Me Go

I have found you now what do I do?

You have loved me your whole life you never for got me, but you left me so long ago.

I have gotten older and so have you.

 I have grown in many ways.

 I have a great life but can not stop thinking of what could have been.

If you had not made the choices you did.

I went on with my life I got married and had kids.

Now we have found each other again.

You always love me.

You say I was with you on every mountain and every shore.

 You thought of me always but, why did you shut the door.

Life has went on and you are alone

But if we had made different choices our life could have grown together with out all the storms.   

You were always in my heart you were my first love.

I loved you with all my heart but you hurt me and tore me apart.

Now so many years have past we have found each other.

 Now we have to put the past in the past.

To let each other know what we both have been through and the feeling we have been holding from our past.

It is not hard to believe that you never for got me I was your first love.

 But to have carried me with you in your heart for so long.

You think of me often and wonder if I had a good life.

 I never for got you how could I.

You were my first love you were a part of my life.

We were so young we did not know what our life had in store.

You served our country this I know.

I could have seen the world through your eyes if you had never let me go.

Like 1 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
J A Overton

Hi Candance, this is lovely so well written and totally from the heart, i find the past is best left in the past and believe our lives are already mapped out. so if you're meant to be with a particular someone then if it's meant to be it will be. drop by when you have five and check out some of my work, 

thanks jeff

Reply
author
Candance Garska

Thank you Jeff,

This is a follow up poem from Lasting Love. I wrote it after running in to my first loves ex-wife. She told me he always talked about me and she is the one he bock my  heart over. The two poems are the feelings I have had inside of me. I write from the heart as you can see. The things I write are what I have exasperated as i am sure it is with most writers. Please read the Lasting Love and then reread this one.

I wrote this after a friend of mine sent me a message on facebook telling me she ran into an old friend.

That happen to be the boy in the picture who is a man now. She told him she was in contact with me. He ask how I was she said when she showed him a picture of me he got tears in his eyes and said she is still beautiful as she was when we were teenagers. This is how I know all the things in this poem I wrote. I have not seen him or talked to him. I would love to see what he looks like now maybe one day I will have to go see him when I get down in the area.

Thank you so much for your comment. Not many have seen this poem.

I will have to go and read your poems. Thanks again.

Candannce (Candy) Garska

Reply
author
Michael O'Boyle

I love being able to empathize with a writer's work. Thank you. Post more. 

Reply
Poem -

If I Never Let You Go

If I Never Let You Go

I have found you now what do I do?
You have loved me your whole life you never for got me, but you...

Poem -

A Towns Loss

A Towns Loss

A town and a family mourn today.

There best and brightest has been taken away.

This town...

Poem -

To My Mommy

To My Mommy

I was once a twinkle in your eye.

But I became apart of you before you knew I was here.

I...

Latest poems in Romance, Verse

Poem -

SEE YOU IN MY DREAMS

SEE YOU IN MY DREAMS

It's said Dream Until It Becomes Your Reality...

​​​​When we dream...

The heart can go...

Poem -

Pensive Mood

Pensive Mood

My heart won’t liberate my spirit
because it’s afraid it doesn’t come back,
If I don’t set...

Poem -

MOTHER NATURE'S LOVE

MOTHER NATURE'S LOVE

The gifts she holds close to her heart...

She would freely give...

​​​​​She's not really...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com