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I'm Done

I'm Done

I want to go home
I'm restless here
On This planet
I just can't adapt
I feel trapped
Always seeking somethingΒ 
New scenery
A place that will satisfy
But This place is a lie
Our so called evolution
Carved into the trees in
Bohemian grove
Fictional souls
Build stories
Of neanderthal
Existence
But I seem to resist this
While everyone around me
Just gets on with life
Not even death can
Extinguish my pain
The constant barrageΒ 
Of knowledge and
Answers that will never
Suffice
Earth
A monolithic rock
Within a strange galaxy
Im all alone
I want to go home.

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Nine Eleven

Thanks Lisa, I do get lots of love from my wife and daughter but lately I just feel a deep sadness, like I'm feeling the restlessness of humanity all at once.Β 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! Sir McGowan!!
This is one the most brilliant cries for help...... one of the most interwoven with space and time's inter-galacticness........one of the most enlightened suicidal tendencies ..... one of the most poetically alien pleas........ that it stands 'WAY OUT' amidst the sea of banal farewell letters.......EVER to have hit the internet of this silly putty planet in all of its short-lived history.........THANK YOU kindly for sharing this with us....... and for being shockingly original!!......PINNED!!......Well Done dear poet brother...... and I pray that this is just the rambling of a VERY gifted 'Puddle-Jumper"!!...... because I would hate to say that I was too late to save a related-soul!!....... smiles!!........T xo?✴❀

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Nine Eleven

Thanks Tony, your not to late, suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, I would never do it, it hurts to many people.Β 

I genuinely do wish to leave this planet though, I feel it's not my home, I just can't settle here.

Thanks for your kind words.

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