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In The End

In The End

Deep connections from unknown places
Wasting time, knowing we're in two different spaces.
Abusing my temple, as if being honest wasn't as simple.
Keeping my hope's up, to serve your own purpose
While I'm sitting here thinking we getting closer
You used me, used this body
Then turned around and talked down, making yourself look like the clown.
Cause ain't nothing was said about my body's ratio, when you was giving me filacio, that's what's crazy though
I actually treated you like a person, even when you were so undeserving, these lessons I'm still learning
You can never say I didn't treat you like a friend, even when you treated me less than
Never worry I forgive
But there's no coming back baby you burnt that bridge
In the end.

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Tony Taylor

Hey TAM!!......VERY cool rhythm running throughout this piece.... making it easier to read and feel the anger of betrayal in what comes across (for me) as a lyric line in an almost rap sense of timing!!.......ALL STARS!!...... Well conceived and BEATIFULLY delivered!!......T xo ๐Ÿงโค

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Tam IsMe

Thank you, Tony always nice to hear your feedback. I know I've been gone a while, but it just gave me time to come up with some new pieces.

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Richard Waters

ALL EXPERIENCES ARE VALUABLE. You have suffered, along with many others. Review your life. Reappraise the path which brought you to where you are. LEARN, FROM MISTAKES. They, count for more. They, teach you how to plan ahead. From them comes the fundamentals of emotion, but also the wisdom to avoid further pitfalls, and make something more tangible, for yourself, as well as others.
LIVE, IN THE MOMENT. Focus, on what affects you most. Record, in your memory-bank , what gives to you the durable strength and higher understanding. Survive the worst.....to shine brightly.
TAKE CARE. APPRECIATE YOUR BLESSINGS. APPRECIATE LIFE, in all its forms. x
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Tam IsMe

Thank you so much for your feed back, I'm still learning to take on life experiences as lessons and things to push through not suffer from ... thanks again for the love โค

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