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In the lap of the Gods

In the lap of the Gods

O’er a shadowy silhouetted moorish mountain side
I feast my fascination far and wide
My heart is hammering from the sheer view where I stand
I am in the lap of the Gods from Mother Nature’s command
High up amidst the canvas in the skies as scattered snowflakes caress my eyes

Is there no end to our creator’s delight as I gasp awe-inspired at such a spectacular sight
I am but particle of morning dew dust as I put my faith in her element’s trust
She blows her boisterious bellows to let me know
I am in her mighty hands from the fall below

I holdon with all my force as Northerly winds steer her course
Anchored down beneath stealthy trees they shield me from her wild displease
Yes I froze she almost chilled my very bones from her howling winds with moans and groans
Yet what I would not do to see this all again as yon wonderful waterfall raged down thru the glen

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Greg Etsell

Jill great poem 
wow you should
go and read my new one 
called AVA Maria my own version
and watch the video 
this poem you just wrote
is your masterpice 
and i pinned it

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Tony Taylor

Great work developing the phrasing to bring the imagery to life here.....you've done fine job feeding the mind's eye with loveliness JILL!!…...ALL STARS!!…..well done!!…...LOVE & ROCKETS!!…….T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

Awww so pleased u enjoy ❤️?❤️

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Larry Ran

My Dear Jill,

Your beautiful poem touches the hearts and Souls of its readers.  

Who could not help living in the "lap of luxury"
While sitting "In the lap of the Gods"

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Jill Tait

Awww I’d love to think I do make Cosmo readers smile luv Thank you so much for reading my long list of ditties xxx❤️?❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww Thats so kind of you Simon ❤️?❤️

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Jill Tait

Aww So pleased u like it luv ❤️?❤️

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Marion

Oh I love this Jill...you have truly captured the atmosphere and wildness and beauty...pinned ??

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Jill Tait

Awww chuffed to bits u liked enough to pin me n ouch pml ❤️❤️❤️

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