Poem -
In The Thick Of It
For my boy
Into the thick of it you cameĀ
Like a ribbon of hues,
glints in the pouring rainĀ
And eyes which soothed a wretched soulĀ
Yes... into the thick of it you came,
and stoleĀ
From the deepest depths of a bleeding heartĀ
In the thick of all that festered darkĀ
You glanced a graceful gentle stareĀ
Then placed your love
Where one laid bare
In the thick of the momentĀ
In the thick of despairĀ
You were the lightĀ
That answered a prayerĀ
Yes you were a beaconĀ
A beautiful thiefĀ
Who stole a heartĀ
In the thick of its griefĀ
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Comments
Wonderful poem as always
Thanks so very much my friend :) x
Dearest GWEN,
Your love for your son shines here......its light is a beacon to us all......knowing a little about your history has me near tears here..... for the truth of your situation can be referenced throughout history as one of those beautiful miracles.....the kind which lift the human spirit to new heights......your herculean efforts are an example to us all....and the light that your son has brought into your life is nothing short of miraculous!!....to have refocused your grief.....to have brought you a kind of relief.....I hope I haven't overstepped any boundaries here Gwen.....but I am just such an admirer of you and the strength of you.......PINNED!! (of course)......an absolutely BEAUTIFUL dedication poem...... to an equally beautiful soul in that of your son!!......Bravo dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ : )
Hello Tony, your words are beautiful my friend. I believe my son saved me, at a time when I really wanted to not exist anymore. I always say āhe arrived in the nick of timeā and I know right now he has no idea the value of his significance, or the strength he has given me over time. But I will spend my life ensuring he knows every day how much he is loved. Thank you my lovely friend, for your understanding and sincere words. You are a truly wonderful light in this world. Always lifting others. Many thanks for leaving such kind words here by this poemĀ
Your very good friendĀ
Gwen xx
Awww such a brilliant pen by beautiful, lovely lass ššš
Thank you so much lovely š š·š xx
just beautiful!............................................................................................Jim
Thanks Jim for your kind words xx
This is a beautifully written poem. Children are sooo special and this is a truly gorgeous poem ā full of love x
Hello Tina, thanks for stopping by, you caught the heart of this poem. āFull of Loveā that was my desire. To leave him some breadcrumbs that tell him how much he has meant to me. Maybe one day he will find this here poem, and feel all that love spilling out from my words, all for him :) Many thanks for your lovely comment my friendĀ
Gwen xx
Now that is what I call a real & proper love poem ... One can feel the joy you have so skillfully woven throughout .. What an absolute blessing ... x
Hello Neville, thank you my friend, for gracing your words here next to this special poem. For he is that āa blessingā one I am thankful for every day for having. Truly wonderful feedback my friend, of which I am so grateful to receiveĀ
Gwen xx
Never fear, always a pleasure and invariably mine Gwen .. x
Being a single Mom to a beautiful daughter, I can feel how you feel.Ā Ā
What a great poem this is to your son..
our love is soooooh unconditional.
Hello Leah, it really is unconditional, thank you for stopping by and leaving your heartfelt words. They become our strength in life, so glad you have your own little treasure to cherish
GwenĀ x
You're welcome.Ā
I'll try to be online as much as possible and be able to readĀ poems of giftedĀ poets on Cosmofunnel.comĀ
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Me too, there are many on here. Thank you so much for your kindness ā¤ļø
This is just about stunning Gwen...it absolutely conveys how special and precious and unique motherhood is...that bond is lifelong and unbreakable and often is the only thing that has any real meaning in life...beautiful write xxx
Thank you lovely, you are so very right. I donāt think I would be here had he not been born. He truly became my anchor and strength
Hugs xxxx
Man Iāve read many a love poem, actually not a real fan. But thisā¦. Painted a sweet wonderful feel to that rare event.
JP thank you for your wonderful words, means a lot what you said. So grateful. Thank you for liking this poemĀ
Gwen xĀ