Poem -

In the Wake of a Wish

Maybe we can only
imagine ..
In the wake of a wish
and now wonder ..
But slowly,
just how good we
might once have been ..

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Marion

I would probably call this write a complete analysis of the human psych...'I wish'...'if only'...'maybe if I'd...'
Well maybe not a complete analysis especially not when conversing with a master but you know what I mean...the words you have written do seem to occupy a massive place in the tiny brains of most of us...hugs x

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Neville

You have no idea how much I appreciate this visit Marion .. thank you so much x

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Neville

and you are invariably most kind .. thank you ,,Β 

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sparrowsong

Hello Neville...

I've been asking that alot...

I just asked again this morning...

You don't know the know either but, it's nice to imagine...

It's definitely an OUCH though!

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Neville

thank you so much for dropping in sparrowsong :)Β 

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Being Me

I am delving into your work, Neville, as I have been awol lately. This poem is classy and clever. Few lines ... a lot said x

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Neville

You got me babe .. Thanks T .. N x

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