Poem -
In your eyes
Its all behind the eyes
Love, Joy, Hate, Fear
Words you dont want to say
Words you dont want to hear
One look can tell a story
The start, middle and the end
It can say a thousand words
No matter how much you want to pretend
I see it in your eyes
Screaming to be seen
I see it in your eyes
All dark, powerful and mean
So give me one more look
So i can see into your soul
Reading all your hidden thoughts
Is my only goal
Cos one look can speak a thousand words
So speak them all to me
And under all hidden thoughts
Your eyes will set you free
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Comments
Hey LOUISE KENNEDY!!..... this piece is delivered with an excellent sense of rhythm and timing..... it reads like a song..... speaking to the enigmatic nature of the person it is intended for.....a softness to the warning that you are determined to find out EXACTLY lies behindĀ those eyes..... seems to insinuate that the curiosity has a longingĀ propelling it!!....., a compelling piece !!......ALL STARS!!..... well done sweet poetess!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?āā“ā³
Thank you for your kind words. Love and best wishes being sent your way xx
Brilliant write. The need to see beyond the surface is an obsession and that's how I read this.Ā