Poem -
incision
cut me open
cut me twice
a doc's incision
within a trice
an ache in my tummy
a little pain
with elfin blood
my strength regains
cut me open
cut me thrice
a love's incision
a piercing price
an aching core
ail and anguish
my heart is feeble
is for ever languished
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Hi Bahar Bakht,
Cute and lovely, I love it, my applause, my five stars
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hey BB!!.....long time no read or speak..........been dealing with some stuff...........I liked the succinctness from line to line here..........I hope that elfin blood helps you sweet poetess...........because a torn or broken heart is a tough road..........but ultimately........"almost" always leads to an unexpected joy of some kind..........miss you around here BB!!...........love and rockets!!.........T xx
Bahar, this poem has many layers... I love the elegance and playfulness, and yet it seems to fight against a sad circumstance; it does open up conjecture, but the reader enjoys all that the write conveys, simply well written, gushing with emotion poetry....well done
Thank you Christopher. I was merely trying to communicate that sometimes losing a lover can be more painful than physical pain. Thanks for reading.
B