Incomplete
Undernourished underdeveloped, underestimated
no wonder you feel incomplete.
Unfortunate, used unappreciated, underpriced.
Sell yourself short, hard to walk through closed doors cause you feel undeserving undesirable .
Hello.. say it's not control, what gave the impression that you can escape alive.
Understanding the irrelevant garbage that is a plage on your incomplete missing parts.
That illusive other half , that will fill your holes, make you whole.
An incomplete individual part of the hail storm.
Why is it that you don't know how much pain you are in until you are out of it.
It's difficult when you feel like a half person.
Not quite the full quid not all the pieces, and not the right order.
Incomplete source of empty emphasis.
Completion is a myth not anyone can control beyond themselves.
Taking is not advisable either, it's a given.
Gift of flaws and idiosyncrasies your never going to be, incomplete to me.
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Comments
cool write of part of the answer Liliana!...........................................Jim
Part answer what's the rest.
Wow! This is well written. Love the poetic conclusion at the end. Great writing x
Thank you. Can you please write more enjoy reading your style.
Hi Liliana you are very welcome.
Thankyou for your comment. I am busy writing a novel at the moment, it has kept me busy for many months. Once that is published I will concentrate on poetry for a while. Meanwhile, I escape to Cosmo for a break and to catch up on what my friends are all doing. I love this poem of yours x
Novel wow great.
I hope your talent is read by millions.