The infamous other side ~ Dave's story

Dave walked toward the city bridge
Earlier he had slammed the fridge
For yesterday he had been fired
After three long years unemployed and tired
So walking across after parking his cream car
Looking across the sky to the one star
A zombie pulling him to the edge
Laughing at him all the way across the ledge
Then he jumped into the water
From a height no doubt a well planned slaughter
He had planned to visit the infamous other side
So he flew like an eagle wings spread wide
SLAM into the ocean Lord
Hallowed be thy name (he thought)
Thy kingdom come
Thy will be done
When they buried poor Dave
The man no one could save
R.I.P. upon his stone
Why me? his eternal groan
Dave's wife sobbing in prayer:
"Our Father, which art in heaven,
Hallowed be thy Name.
Thy Kingdom come.
Thy will be done in earth,
As it is in heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread.
And forgive us our trespasses,
As we forgive them that trespass against us.
And lead us not into temptation,
But deliver us from evil.
For thine is the kingdom,
The power, and the glory,
For ever and ever.
Amen".

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Comments
Brilliant write my friend. :D
Josh
Thank you Josh, I was wanting to describe the situation
Glad to meet you and thanks for coming by
best wishes
Jai
the poem just sums up how the world rules our every day sad that the mind takes us to do these things to ourselves over no work great write jai tina x
Tina that is so true, if you can't pay the bills and
lose hope then we don't fit in, we feel useless,
we lose identity, no free tickets for the unemployed
and some cannot bear it.
I found this on the Internet for anyone in that difficult position
http://www.beliefnet.com/Health/12-Depression-Busters-for-the-Unemployed...
thank you Tina for this chance to discuss
kind regards
jai
http://www.beliefnet.com/Health/12-Depression-Busters-for-the-Unemployed...
hey good call jai it is a really life sucking thing good one tina x
Thank you Tina, it can impact us all,
I'm glad you see the relevance and I hope poetry
brings attention to our daily strife.
Kind regards
jai