Poem -
Infinite Destiny
There shall be a day
I skip along your mantle of pearly huesΒ
To cruise beside that great divideΒ
Where I shall feel myself subsideΒ
into an ever crescent moonΒ
That which croons a distilled dreamΒ
An unforeseen truthΒ
Seeded secretly
Inside the heart of mans youthΒ
It has whispered in my ear...
since my mind could think to beΒ
It is where the soul restsΒ
Where all consciousness feels free
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Stunning word choice here Gwen, as you know this subject is the one that dominates my mind endlessly so the whole poem resonated deeply with me.
love your work xx
Thanks so very much my friend, it is forever racing through my own mind too. Thanks for the lovely feedback xxΒ
Thanks Greg for reading and the pin, so glad you liked it xΒ
This is beautifully written. Love it and pinned it x
Thanks so very much Tina, so glad you liked it. I hope you had a good Christmas and New year, all the best for 2022 xx
Yeah.Β
Very cool, let all frames of mind, the bad the good, the ugly, some glorious day be set free by every body.Β
ββββββ
ββββββ
Wow thanks Liliana for you awesome feedback. I hope you had a good Christmas and all the best for 2022 xx
LorrisΒ
Many thanks for the like and vote. So glad you enjoyed this one. All the best for 2022 xΒ
Beautiful words as always.
Thanks so much JP always so lovely to have you visit my work xΒ
I can feel a gentle tug & nudge .. the pull is there, I just want to feel it more .. how easy it would be just to give in to it .. thank you Gwen .. N x
Itβs like a soft calling isnβt it Neville...thanks so much for stopping by xΒ
The elegance....the soft beckoning......the inner workings of this rhyme scheme......the poetic timing......all add up to the seat of the soul...the magic of life itself......an absolutely exquisite write my friend......truly divine......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.......your ever-friend.....Tony!!
βThe seat of the soulβ Beautiful Tony, many many thanks for your elegant commentary my friend. So happy you liked this one. I am always thrilled to find you have stopped by
Your friend
GwenΒ xΒ
Hi Gwen! Happy new year! Truly beautiful piece. Always elegant in your words. Just loved it ππππ
Wow P πLove it when you pop up π Happy New Year lovely, much love to you and your family. Thanks for your wonderful words, so happy you liked it. Hope to find you posting some of your amazing work on here xxx ππ
Hi Gwen! Definitely will do! Hope to catch up with you also. Px ππππ
Yay π so thrilled you plan to post here, canβt wait to read you ππβ€οΈxxx
Thank you Gwen for always wanting to read my writes ππ½π let me pick one now and post...do it in the moment hey lol
Always a pleasure P πx
lovely ode Gwen you are such a talented writer