Poem -
Internal Destruction
People comment ,
Always saying you look well
Little realizing
The body is just a healthy shell
Inside is creeping ruin and decay
Natures sardonic play
To let you know as years advance
Life isn't such a clear path .
- And its mainly downhill all the way ....
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Hi Chris, I really like the simplicity of this poem but its just so impactful. Great write. All the best. The Fish of the Sea
Good morning Fish of the sea ! Thank you for your positive comment , The influence came from a line in a radiohead song ! I'm really glad you liked my write and hope there is maybe others of my work you find interesting ! Thank you again and warm wishes for a pleasant Thursday ! Chris :)
Hi Chris. A great little piece simply put into words. Aging and life summed up well. A powerful write. Fab! Px?
Thank you Pratibha ! The poem was actually influenced by a line in a radiohead song and just came together as 1 piece ! I'm glad you enjoyed and wishing you a happy Thursday ! Cx
Oh excellent and well said x
Pinned this one Chris...powerful write...hugs ?