Poem -
Invisible but seen
I try to hide itÂ
I succeedÂ
I fake a smile
You ignore what I desperately needÂ
I take a breath
You ask if I’m okayÂ
You don’t want the truth
What am I supposed to sayÂ
You say you care
You say you see
You day you know
You day you’re always there for me
But you don’t, you’re not
I’m an open book with a fake coverÂ
I cry at night and don’t want to breath
All you see is what you don’t have to discoverÂ
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Very well written, Leah.
Nicely penned angel Â
Very well written and enjoyed. Only issue i would take is second paragraph from bottom doesnt make sense. 'you day you know,
you day you're always there for me.'
did you mean to say say? Like i said please dont take this as critism, i loved your poem.
Very beautiful, I loved the rhymes
Nicely done, Leah.
Raw and powerful poetry.
You've bared your soul here for all to see...
~♥? Dean Kuch ♥?~