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....is divine?

....is divine?

Why is forgiveness so hard to find?
ShornĀ  up and buried deep within an unfathomable pit of pride
Time erodes the edges of guilt, removing the seductive lustre,
reducing it to pallidĀ  pyrite.Ā 
No glister remains....
Forgiveness breaks the illusion of perfection.
Forgiveness breaks the fragility of a once perfect relationship,
into an acceptance of a fractured love.
A meaningless sorry is a dagger to the heart,
inflictingĀ  a perpetual wound.
When Pride is no longer successful achievement but a biblical conceit,
Forgiveness can be the balm, the emollient to soothe, to comfort and to heal.
To find Forgiveness is to relinquish the pastĀ 
and look for 'the thing with feathers' we call hope !

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lodigiana

Thanks so much Lauren! Xx
Lodigiana

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StevieC

Lovely piece! What you say about forgiveness is so true! Nice work xx
SteviecĀ 

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sparrowsong

Hello Lodigiana...

More than AMAZING this write is...

Ā A word I know is out there, but I can't seem to think of it right now...

Your definition for Hope is going to be my daily or should I say moment when I may need that sweet reminder will never escape me...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Best wishes and blessings!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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lodigiana

Thanks Sparrowsong- (sorry for the delay in responding but been travelling back from holiday and no wifi!!!)Ā 

Forgiveness is a really tough one to deal with I always think... we know it might make us feel better ...but it's just hard to give into it.....

Without forgiveness and accepting thngs though,Ā  there is little chance of a hopeful future so taking the tough route is the better way...but tough!!
Thanks you so much for reading and your really positive comments! much appreciated xxx

Lodigiana

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