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Pratibha Savani

Lovely! I need to do more gradening!! But i don't like little creatures!! But will have more flowers pots next year and make time for it doing it all!! Px

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John Loopstra

Thank you. Apparently my first reply was deleted by myself, the silly fool I am. Inspired by my wife (she has Mars and Moon in Aries and I am an Aries). It is all too easy to explode over a lid  not opening at once or a typo in a reply and waste energy better spent at gardening, way too few roses in the world today. The Pic was taken by my wife in a rose garden ???

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Marion

Stunning write John, says so much in few words...great stuff ?

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John Loopstra

You make me blush? I. Always have loved minimalism?
 

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Marion

Why make you blush??

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John Loopstra

I am always shy when complimented, that's all. I have always been insecure, as long as I knew nothing of the vanished twin stuff. Ever since I know, I have been growing up (finally ?)

This morning I noticed that I was influenced by my wife: she'd been busy with runes and an Anglo-Saxon rune poem - The first two lines are very much Beowulf in cadence and alliteration ?

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Poem -

Night’s doorways

the picture is (this time) not one of our own

Night’s doorways

Blindly,
night comes to me.

Naked,
night reaches deeply into me.

Yet in a...

Poem -

Time’s aflame (a letter to...

Time’s aflame (a letter to my vanished twin (syndrome))

Time’s aflame,
ashes whirling, yearning to rest
upon the earth that is still too hot
...

Poem -

Out of past lives lava...

Out of past lives lava veins rise

Her match wakes music so fast
I must listen.

At lightspeed the tones sink rapidly
...

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Don't ask me about...

Don't ask me about apartment unit b44

here at Highland Manor Apartments,
cuz the place looks like a shambles,
hence to do justice...

Poem -

Hair envy to the max

Hair envy to the max

I felt way to embarrassed to axe
the cashier his name,
nor express any physical attraction...

Poem -

Awake

Woman in the mirror combs her hair
Has not much to say.

Doesn't remember.

The house...

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