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Pratibha Savani

Lovely! I need to do more gradening!! But i don't like little creatures!! But will have more flowers pots next year and make time for it doing it all!! Px

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John Loopstra

Thank you. Apparently my first reply was deleted by myself, the silly fool I am. Inspired by my wife (she has Mars and Moon in Aries and I am an Aries). It is all too easy to explode over a lidĀ  not opening at once or a typo in a reply and waste energy better spent at gardening, way too few roses in the world today. The Pic was taken by my wife in a rose garden ???

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Marion

Stunning write John, says so much in few words...great stuff ?

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John Loopstra

You make me blush? I. Always have loved minimalism?
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Marion

Why make you blush??

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John Loopstra

I am always shy when complimented, that's all. I have always been insecure, as long as I knew nothing of the vanished twin stuff. Ever since I know, I have been growing up (finally ?)

This morning I noticed that I was influenced by my wife: she'd been busy with runes and an Anglo-Saxon rune poem - The first two lines are very much Beowulf in cadence and alliterationĀ ?

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Poem -

Time’s aflame (a letter to...

Time’s aflame (a letter to my vanished twin (syndrome))

Time’s aflame,
ashes whirling, yearning to rest
upon the earth that is still too hot
...

Poem -

Out of past lives lava...

Out of past lives lava veins rise

Her match wakes music so fast
I must listen.

At lightspeed the tones sink rapidly
...

Poem -

water on the heath

water on the heath

On the flowering heath
an unexpected fen.

Flocks of waterlilies drifting in silence,
...

Latest poems in Drama

Poem -

Yours truly a tried and...

Yours truly a tried and true (no Keaton) Philly buster

boot not so suburb (superb)
Prone to bloviation pure and simple
rides on figurative high...

Poem -

Dare Date

Halloween Twist

Dare Date

She was called pretty
A dainty so classy
Until night of 29th
When fate draw a fight...

Poem -

The benefit of a hussy...

The benefit of a hussy without being married

Hyperbole taken to the mad max
mayhem when necessary
to, poeticize, publicize,
...

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