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Pratibha Savani

Lovely! I need to do more gradening!! But i don't like little creatures!! But will have more flowers pots next year and make time for it doing it all!! Px

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John Loopstra

Thank you. Apparently my first reply was deleted by myself, the silly fool I am. Inspired by my wife (she has Mars and Moon in Aries and I am an Aries). It is all too easy to explode over a lid  not opening at once or a typo in a reply and waste energy better spent at gardening, way too few roses in the world today. The Pic was taken by my wife in a rose garden ???

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Marion

Stunning write John, says so much in few words...great stuff ?

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John Loopstra

You make me blush? I. Always have loved minimalism?
 

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Marion

Why make you blush??

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John Loopstra

I am always shy when complimented, that's all. I have always been insecure, as long as I knew nothing of the vanished twin stuff. Ever since I know, I have been growing up (finally ?)

This morning I noticed that I was influenced by my wife: she'd been busy with runes and an Anglo-Saxon rune poem - The first two lines are very much Beowulf in cadence and alliteration ?

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