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IS YOUR MIND MADE UP

IS YOUR MIND MADE UP

Please make your mind up, dont leave me wondering 
You know I want you ,but do you truely want me,
One day you do the next you dont,
I'm in turmoil and upset waiting to know.

I'm waiting for you and what you intend to do ,
So my babe, will you stay or will you go ,
I have my feelings but not sure on yours,
So I'm hoping your feelings will be solely pure ,

Deep down I feel you want to stay, 
but are too frightened to actually say ,
You think I will go ,and leave you, on your own,
But your very wrong, I want to be with you .

For ever and always ,I just wish you could see ,
I mean every word and wish you would trust me ,
I really and truly want to be with you ,
With hand on my heart , I will lovingly say ,

please make your mind up, and I will pray you will stay 💋❤

 

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Audrey youde

Thank you once more John,,I so appreciate lovely comments x

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

A lovely sweet love poem with uncertainties felt perhaps on both sides. Love can be a hard complex decision and your fine poem portrays that and more. Kudos.

pls pleez do comment my newest poem too.

 

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Audrey youde

Thank you for your lovely comment my new found friend , and yes i will certainly look at yours ,

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Audrey youde

Thank you for your most welcome comments ,my newly found friend, i would love to read your work and will be honoured to leave my comments ,thank you once again 

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