I howl but no one takes heed
Causing chaos to the clear
I make sure your day is a mountain of misery
And your efforts on your exterior.. merely wasted time
Hi Tyler, a clever piece of poetry ## doesn't have to be long, it's the message that counts ## well done ## Welcome to Cosmo ##
Congrats on the nomination
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An intriguing little piece which conceals its secrets till the last line.
Nicely, and obliquely, written.
Welcome to Cosmofunnel.
J ;)
Super glad you enjoyed it, hopefully as much as I've enjoyed exploring your pieces!
Thanks for the kind words! :)
Alan Ginsberg's most famous poem is called Howl, but it is 3 pages long. I like yours better. JCG
Oo thank you, very flattering! Short and sweet :)
this piece proves it's about quality not quantity! i really like it, and congrats on being nominated☺️ x
Aww thank you! Really appreciate you taking a moment to read it, enjoyed reading your pieces too :) x
Hi Tyler, a clever piece of poetry ## doesn't have to be long, it's the message that counts ## well done ## Welcome to Cosmo ##
Congrats on the nomination
Thanks so much Leah :)
love it -
Thanks so much :)
Would short but beautiful.... Enjoyed
Thank you that's very kind! X