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Yoga Babe

Wow! Looks like it was nominated.

This is what cuts to the bone writing style should be all about.

Amazing

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Susan O'Reilly

thanks for the wow yoga yeah it was an angry write I suppose glad you enjoyed have a great day cheers x

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Shirley Pourbaba

Hey Susan,

Love your guts, nothing wrong with being little naughty, its got its own flavor, diffenetly humorous.

Loved it, and thanks for making me laugh. 

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Shirley your the only one that got the humour thanks so much I always found it angry funny thought it was just my weird mind lol glad you loved and I'm so glad I put it up now I'm imagining you laughing all the best Susan x

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Tina Moore

congratulation's susan on your win   knew you could do it   all the best   tina

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Susan O'Reilly

ah thanks hun and with the one I was afraid to put up lol delighted but very surprised x

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Tina Moore

i think poetry comes in all forms this is a poetry site with comments to be left good or bad so keith im sure susan will not take offence to that comment  as all comments are welcomed     best wish's tina

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Keith W.

i wasn't trying to offend, I was asking a serious question.. WTF???

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Keith think I answered best I can I didn't judge it so you'll have to ask them cheers x

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Morris Holland ...

Poetry weather short or long.. you have to look into what the poet is trying to say. Many poems can be looked at in many different angles. Also when it comes to poetry it's like an opinion and we are all entitled to them. Lets not judge, lates not hate... We must support and encourage each other and push the best out of each other. 

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi Morris poetry is art and each piece is a creation whether short or long I agree cheers x

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