Poem -
It's So Surreal
Many things astound me
But nothing more than our love
It's so surreal, to describe it
It's like a beautiful gift from above
Such a heavenly image
Totally beyond comprehension
How one could love another so deeply
It's like another dimension
There must be a way, surely there is
Can't go on, need to feel you again
This craving I feel inside is unbearable
This refrain is always the same
My very first thoughts every morning
Are always of you and me
Wrapped in each other's loving embrace
I dream of the day we are free
Free to live in each other's arms
For the rest of days here on earth
A dream I dream every day every night
Your image is always first
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This is beautiful JACK!! ~ I know the feeling....... the surreal feeling of "is this really happening to me!"........ the first thing you think of In the morning....... is her...... the feeling of being blessed beyond comprehension....... lovely write brother!!.......ALL STARS......a pleasure to read!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
What a great friend you are Mr. T!!! You make me like a poet!!! I always look so forward to yourΒ positive comments... mucho thanks once again!!! Brother Jack xo
Hi Β Jack This is so lovely its not sadΒ
but it brought a tear to my eyeΒ To have a love like you
describe here is amazingThe pic is surreal too
a great choice to go withΒ your write
I love this one dear friend, i too will pin to re readΒ
Love n hugs Debs xx
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Between you and Cherie and Tony, I feel like a million bucks!!! Love and hugs, dear Debs xxxxx
wonderful write Jack your style always brings a smile!
Hello Sweet Poetess! Thank you a bunch for your kind words! Love and hugs, Jack xxx