Itsy-Bitsy

Itsy-Bitsy

Captivated by my embrace
Barbs caress angelic face
Bitter cold in immortality
I need to touch your vitality

Upon sanguine satin sheet
So tender my sweetmeat
Don't try to run; it's much too late,
Poison lapse an itsy-bitsy wait.

Spend eternity in titillating arms,
I want to savor your inner charms.
Look into octave sable eyes,
Reckoned, a tasty little prize.

Hush now, don't thrash about so,
Such bliss surveying flux flow.
I can't assure, you won’t go insane
I can only promise it won't be in vain
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Fauxcroft

Love this wicked little number :) lolΒ 

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Syd

Excellent poem Lisa. Very in keeping with the Halloween season.

- Syd xoΒ 

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Anthony Yormesor

Wow! Every bit of this work was perfectly done. Thumbs up PoetessDarkly

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unknown2.0

Wow! it's amazing!!!
Keep up the good work :)

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ecesis__

Lovely work poetess.Β 
The last 4 lines are composed very well.Β 
The pauses, commas, seem to wrap it up, and provide a kind of entrancing air when read internally.Β 
i love the 4 line, 4 line. an original, traditional form. i love to use it, its quite magical when you do. Like an ingrained system built into it, that has an elegant sweetness.Β 
"sanguine satin sheet" visually evoking! i can see how its sanguine... light to the touch, enwrapping round the curves of the body. a shininess etc.Β  well crafted.

Β dear, i hope immortality isn't cold for you poetess. your warmth lies in your books. you can always caress them.. haha.Β 

insanity doesn't carry vanity. enticing idea. many avenues to be explored!!Β 

:) x

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Wendy Wass

Well done Lisa so well deserved. You have such a great talent 😍

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Wendy Wass

I've been waiting along time for your true talent to be acknowledged, and now it has. YaheeπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Barry Childs

Well done on your great winning poem. Fabulous. Barry x

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Cherie Sumner Taylor

Congratulations on winning the October Poetry contest!Β  Yay!Β  I love all your work....always getting creativity and originality....Love n HugsΒ 

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Silent Dreamer

Congratulations to you too!! It's a beautiful poemπŸ˜πŸ’•

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Nigel Cresswell

Poetess I nearly missed this and that would of been a crime. Great write and congratulations. Well done.
Nigel

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Owen Tilley

Congratulations on 1st place!!! Great write - enjoyed it immensely...

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Michael Roy

From the first word this is captivating. Very nice, PD.

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John Astley

Congratulations! very well done. Such a delicious poem especially this time of year!

John x

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wow these is of the book . brilliantly penned. A beautifully flow with images that stand out. A piece of art my talented sisterπŸ™πŸ’™ God blessΒ 

🚧 πŸš‚poetry🌐delivery🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

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Marion Price

Congratulations on winning!! Well done xx

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Marion Price

How do I do votes Lisa? I can only seem to do likes??

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