Poem -
Itsy-Bitsy
Captivated by my embrace
Barbs caress angelic face
Bitter cold in immortality
I need to touch your vitality
Upon sanguine satin sheet
So tender my sweetmeat
Don't try to run; it's much too late,
Poison lapse an itsy-bitsy wait.
Spend eternity in titillating arms,
I want to savor your inner charms.
Look into octave sable eyes,
Reckoned, a tasty little prize.
Hush now, don't thrash about so,
Such bliss surveying flux flow.
I can't assure, you wonβt go insane
I can only promise it won't be in vain
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Comments
Nice write!
Thank you kindly Red
Wickedly good write?
thank you kindly Wendy
Love this wicked little number :) lolΒ
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Excellent. Dark and sensual.
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Another excellent write xx
Thank you kindly Ana
Excellent poem Lisa. Very in keeping with the Halloween season.
- Syd xoΒ
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Wow! Every bit of this work was perfectly done. Thumbs up PoetessDarkly
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Wow! it's amazing!!!
Keep up the good work :)
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Just glad I'm not the prey...excellent xx
thank you kindly Marion
You are a master of creativity
Thank you kindly Greg
Well done Lisa so well deserved. You have such a great talent ?
thank you Wendy wasn't expecting this at all. it isΒ wonderful though to be acknowledged.
I've been waiting along time for your true talent to be acknowledged, and now it has. Yahee??
Aw shucks donβt make me blush lol thank you kindlyΒ
thank you Barry, if it wasn't for all the support, it couldn't have happened
Sublime...a well deserved win! xx
thank you Caron
Poetess I nearly missed this and that would of been a crime. Great write and congratulations. Well done.
Nigel
thank you, Nigel. I am honored you stopped by
Congratulations on 1st place!!! Great write - enjoyed it immensely...
thank you Owen
From the first word this is captivating. Very nice, PD.
thank you, Michael, it totally shocked me to win first place. I hope I can do this again soon. I am working on a new book. I am not sure if I will put this one in or not
You should include it, really.
Congratulations! very well done. Such a delicious poem especially this time of year!
John x
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Poetessdarkly hi sister poet congratulations ?????βΊ???????????????
wow these is of the book . brilliantly penned. A beautifully flow with images that stand out. A piece of art my talented sister?? God blessΒ
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Thank you kindly PD
Congratulations on winning!! Well done xx
How do I do votes Lisa? I can only seem to do likes??
Thank you kindly Marion message sent to you:)
Well done friend... a winner!!!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
thank you kindly Happy!