Poem - 08 October 2018, 08:05

Itsy-Bitsy

Captivated by my embrace
Barbs caress angelic face
Bitter cold in immortality
I need to touch your vitality

Upon sanguine satin sheet
So tender my sweetmeat
Don't try to run; it's much too late,
Poison lapse an itsy-bitsy wait.

Spend eternity in titillating arms,
I want to savor your inner charms.
Look into octave sable eyes,
Reckoned, a tasty little prize.

Hush now, don't thrash about so,
Such bliss surveying flux flow.
I can't assure, you won’t go insane
I can only promise it won't be in vain

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Spider Victim

Poetry Genre:

Freestyle

Topic:

Halloween

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43 comments

Comments

RedtheCreator08 October 2018, 08:12

Nice write!

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐08 October 2018, 08:13

Thank you kindly Red

Wendy Wass08 October 2018, 10:05

Wickedly good write?

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐08 October 2018, 10:57

thank you kindly Wendy

Fauxcroft08 October 2018, 11:53

Love this wicked little number :) lol

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐08 October 2018, 11:55

Thank you kindly

Ian William08 October 2018, 16:45

Excellent. Dark and sensual.

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐08 October 2018, 16:48

thank you kindly

lodigiana10 October 2018, 11:00

Another excellent write xx

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐10 October 2018, 11:07

Thank you kindly Ana

Syd10 October 2018, 16:01

Excellent poem Lisa. Very in keeping with the Halloween season.

- Syd xo

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐10 October 2018, 16:02

Thank you kindly Syd

Anthony Yormesor12 October 2018, 01:27

Wow! Every bit of this work was perfectly done. Thumbs up PoetessDarkly

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐12 October 2018, 02:51

Thank you kindly

unknown2.012 October 2018, 01:48

Wow! it's amazing!!!
Keep up the good work :)

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐12 October 2018, 02:52

Thank you kindly

Marion17 October 2018, 11:17

Just glad I'm not the prey...excellent xx

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐17 October 2018, 11:19

thank you kindly Marion

GREG TUCKER THE...25 October 2018, 15:29

You are a master of creativity

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐25 October 2018, 15:39

Thank you kindly Greg

Wendy Wass05 November 2018, 13:54

Well done Lisa so well deserved. You have such a great talent ?

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐05 November 2018, 14:07

thank you Wendy wasn't expecting this at all. it is wonderful though to be acknowledged.

Wendy Wass05 November 2018, 14:45

I've been waiting along time for your true talent to be acknowledged, and now it has. Yahee??

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐05 November 2018, 15:09

Aw shucks don’t make me blush lol thank you kindly

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐05 November 2018, 14:17

thank you Barry, if it wasn't for all the support, it couldn't have happened

Marie Swann06 November 2018, 04:41

Sublime...a well deserved win! xx

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 November 2018, 04:56

thank you Caron

Nigel Cresswell...07 November 2018, 14:52

Poetess I nearly missed this and that would of been a crime. Great write and congratulations. Well done.
Nigel

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐07 November 2018, 15:05

thank you, Nigel. I am honored you stopped by

Owen James09 November 2018, 20:50

Congratulations on 1st place!!! Great write - enjoyed it immensely...

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐09 November 2018, 21:10

thank you Owen

Michael Roy10 November 2018, 18:21

From the first word this is captivating. Very nice, PD.

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐10 November 2018, 19:14

thank you, Michael, it totally shocked me to win first place. I hope I can do this again soon. I am working on a new book. I am not sure if I will put this one in or not

Michael Roy10 November 2018, 19:26

You should include it, really.

John Astley12 November 2018, 10:30

Congratulations! very well done. Such a delicious poem especially this time of year!

John x

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐12 November 2018, 10:35

Thank you kindly John

?POETRYDELIVERY15 November 2018, 18:59

Poetessdarkly hi sister poet congratulations ?????☺???????????????
wow these is of the book . brilliantly penned. A beautifully flow with images that stand out. A piece of art my talented sister?? God bless

? ?poetry?delivery?????

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐15 November 2018, 19:00

Thank you kindly PD

Marion16 November 2018, 17:46

Congratulations on winning!! Well done xx

Marion16 November 2018, 17:47

How do I do votes Lisa? I can only seem to do likes??

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐16 November 2018, 17:54

Thank you kindly Marion message sent to you:)