Poem -

Jack Frost

Jack Frost

It is cold in here

It reaches to my core and shivers my spine

A world void of warmth

Freezing all that I touch in a blanket of Ice

Chilling with arctic winds blowing at my back

Like sleeping in a igloo naked and in the fetal position

Warm thoughts elude me like chasing a fairy into the woods

I can't stand the sub zero temperature leaking from inside of me

Liquid nitrogen replaces my blood and shoots through my veins

My tears freeze to my face 

I am frozen and alone in the dark

Every heat source I pass runs away from me

Fires expire and candles blow themselves out

I'm stuck in the reflection you see upon a frozen lake bed

No one can hear my voice it freezes on my tongue

The children can't see me here but they feel my icy sting upon their warm faces

By LukeCoomer (c)

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Luke Cool write:-) Seriously i 
loved the story of your "Jack Frost" 
Great imagery keeping the coldness
theme from beginning to end 
Enjoyed Great write 
Best wishes Deb

 
 

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Luke Coomer

This was an atempt to step outside of my own style so I really appreciate your kind words

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Deborah Evans

 I  noticed you did`nt rhyme in in this one Luke I meant to 
mention that.... It did not need to rhyme.it was a great read.. Debs 

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