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JEALOUSY IS A DISEASE

JEALOUSY IS A DISEASE

I curse thee I curse thee I curse thee
the wizened hag screamed, displaying her rotted teeth
Her breath emitted the smell of putridness 
a blackened soul, sucking goodness like a leach
A fair maiden the one, who this god forsaken 
hag had spewed out her evil spell 
N` er would she have a promise of a child 
a life lived without one, would be her living hell
 
On  bended knees the maiden begged the hag 
to change the black magic she inflicted
She would do anything to not have 
to live her life, barren, forever afflicted
The hag filled with envy at the sight 
of the beautiful young lass
Said "I shall grant thee thine wish but thou
will never look again into a looking glass"

"For I will scar thy face... so ugly 
you will be 
No handsome young lad
will  want to, marry thee"
The maiden wept but in solace 
she still had hope to bare a child
Even if she were ugly she still had 
a beautiful loving heart inside

And so it came to pass her hopes 
and dreams all came true 
She met a lad and in time 
a great love grew
He did nt see her scarred face 
just the person within
So he took her hand and asked 
her to marry him.

Two years later they were blessed 
with a bonny boy
Forgotten were the hag the curse 
and her evil ploy.
Jealousy is a disease that​​​​​ eats away inside
the moral of this fable
An ugliness in itself,a curse I 
condemn, as much as I am able... 

 

 

 

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Rose Sho

Hi Debs beautiful narrative....Jealousy is a disease that kills slowing...I love the fable and the Ole English you used...She had scars but true love looks right inside and not the physical....Thanks for sharing this beautiful story...

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi Cherie As i said to Merrill I dreamed this poem
It was such a weird  dream but it was all there to write 
You have the heart of it as you always do :-)
I detest jealousy Having suffered much experience of it 
Thank you for your kind words always a pleasure to read 
Love n hugs Debs xox
 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Debs,

Wow!  Your lovely archaic tale has inspired me to write a followup.  Thank you for this so unique saga.  I love when you write in this ancient genre.  My embellishment of your beautiful tale is titled, "A Tale of the Beautiful Maiden".  I still cannot believe how your story moved me.

Hugs, Peace and  Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sweet Rose so glad you enjoyed 
Thank you for your kind comments 
and insight with this one 
which is spot on 
Lots of Love Debs 
 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry So  Glad you enjoyed i love the ole English 
words and era, I love when people get some inspiration from 
my work, and i shall head over to your pageto read your piece now
Thank you for your lovely comments
Always a pleasure to read 
Love n hugs Debs xox
 

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Wolf Soul

You have me smiling Deborah.  

This is so true. Love does not see physicality but the beauty hidden within. 

Loved it

♡M

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Mannon  Thank you for reading 
I am so glad you liked the theme of this one 
Thank you for your kind words 
Very much appreciated 
Best wishes Debs x

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