Poem -

Just Another Way Out

things are not always what they seem .. are they

Just Another Way Out

She was all made up
and such
a pretty fabrication ..
Built like
a temple, yet sounded
hollow ..
Like some old church
might well
sound perhaps ..
And maybe likewise
just as broken
She was however,
swiftly mended
But yet, there are still
those who
might suggest she had
more than
just a hand in her
very own, ultimate demise ..

 

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Neville

How very kind you are .. and so I thank you .. both kindly & true my friend .......................... Neville :)

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RG

I read it a few times and on the third time it taught me the speed and how perfect it was , please, make it an audio poem.  

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Neville

Thank you kindly Robert, now that is something to think about ... maybe :)

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Marion

Excellent write Neville and we all know people like this dont we x

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Neville

I believe so too ....................  thanks Marion x

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