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Just Your Glimpse

Just Your Glimpse

Just your glimmpse
And I will be happy
I will not say anything
Not even ask for a coffee
My eyes will say
Everything to you
I just want to show
My love that is soo true
I will beg for your understanding
And make you assure
Not to leave you ever
Please don't ignore me anymore
My love for you
Will always be the same
I am scared to say these words
Because I am really ashamed
The time we had spent together
Was a precious gift to me
And now you have gone too far
I am waiting you near this sea
I admit my mistakes
I know I broke your heart
Just want to say come back once
I promise to give you your part
The situations were not good
I thought you will understand
But for you I was a cheater
Who was playing with your hand
Believe me Trust me 
That is all I can say
Whether you come back to me or not
You were always there in my nights
And will always be there 
Whenever I will pray!
 

 

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Jason Lee

Very emotional Surabhi, much enjoyed :)

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Surabhi Saxena

Heyyy thank youu Jason...I am glad you enjoyed it..:) :)

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Surabhi Saxena,

Your poem is simple and realistic. It depicts the initial stages of love and romance. Good work.I like the below lines:

My love for you
Will always be the same
I am scared to say these words
Because I am really ashamed
The time we had spent together
Was a precious gift to me
And now you have gone too far
I am waiting you near this sea

Thanks & Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Surabhi Saxena

Thank youuuu veryyy much Sir...:) Its my honour to recieve such lovely comments from you..:) Glad you liked it..!! Keep writing..!

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Surabhi Saxena

Thats so sweet of you Sista..:) Thank you for the lovelyy comments..:)
Love
 

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piusha singh

Hi Surabhi,I m loving each lines of your poem very emotional!!!

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Surabhi Saxena

Heyy thank youu veryy much for your kind and valuable comments..!! Keep them coming..:)
Love
Surabhi

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Maddison Law

You write with so much emotion 

a beautiful poem, well done

Maddison

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Surabhi Saxena

Heeyy..Thank youu soo veryy muchh..for your lovely and awesome comment..:)
Keep writing
Regards and Love
Surabhi
 

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Syed Mudasir

I am completely blown away by your sensational poem; the simplicity and flow was amazing

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Surabhi Saxena

Thank you soo much for your lovely comments.:).I am really glad you got connected to it..and enjyoed it..!!
Keep writing!
Regards
Surabhi

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