Poem -

The Labyrinth

In the labyrinth 
all will perish,
so our time 
we must cherish, 
none may see 
none may know, 
where it is 
that we go.  

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Gregg

Short and good. The poem gives a warning to an intricate combination of  life paths or passages in which it is difficult to find one's way or to reach your final exit. 

In the labyrinth 
all will perish,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Gregg

Thank you so much many people think the poem is about escaping the labyrinth but in reality it's about exploring the labyrinth until there's no where left to go. And thanks so much for the kind words it's very hard being a 17yo make who writes poetry but is people like you who make my day easier! Thank you very much

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Gregg,

escaping the labyrinth but in reality it's about exploring the labyrinth until there's no where left to go

Hope my interpretation is acceptable. 

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Gregg

I believe all poems should be left up to the readers interpretation not the authors I don't write for myself I write for my readers to enjoy themselves

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Thanks dear Gregg, your are right. I agree with your valuable comments

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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