Poem -
Lady Muse
Guiding hands for eyes to see.
Chafed palms caress her neck on key.
Unlocking a refrain the melody arose.
With each lyrical verse, I compose.
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Strumming strings with intricate care.
To bring out splendor beyond compare.
Now a wood's worn on this ole guitar.
Yes, it holds more than one surface mar.
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Treat her like a lady, always give respect.
Fine wine's with age, her tune flows yet.
I sense you think me of a feeble mind.
But believe me; I'm more than just blind.
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No mere words can explain the duty.
Making love to this muse beauty.
Soft notes arise music lingers.
I make it come with just my fingers.
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thank you for your support, this poem is based on Picasso's painting, the old guitar player
Absolutely brilliant!! I love this, I jokingly get called Picasso by people because I view things/life in distorted ways from others, like seeing in infrared at some points haha, sorry for the babble but I love the musical tone in this! ????
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Beautiful write Lisa. Love it x
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Beautiful poem.
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Hello, Lisa.
Good aabb rhyme scheme featuring primarily true end rhymes.
Some good alliteration scattered throughout, such as "Strumming strings" and "But believe", just to cite a couple of prime examples.
Well penned as always!
~Dean ?
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My pleasure as always, Lisa.Β :)
hi Lisa,Β
Beautifully done, I love your phrasing here
brilliant as usual
All my love
Lorna x
Thank you Lorna. Been editing old works edited Β your poem Lorna
ooh I'll take a look now x
thank you Lorna
Hi Lisa...yet again you have created a wonderful, almost musically poetic piece! i love this andΒ will enjoy rereading it for a long time to come..beautiful work!
Lodigiana x
Hi Lisa
another beautiful ink .
By the way, your novel is unavailable .
got a message from the publisher.
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They asked me to make them into two volumes give it a few days
Ok. Keep me posted.
hugs
"Strumming strings with intricate care.
To bring out splendor beyond compare,"
are beautiful stanzas but this whole poem is beautifully written, in general!Β
Tehmina xo
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