Poem - 06 March 2018, 10:18

Lady Muse

Guiding hands for eyes to see.
Chafed palms caress her neck on key.
Unlocking a refrain the melody arose.
With each lyrical verse, I compose.

Strumming strings with intricate care.
To bring out splendor beyond compare.
Now a wood's worn on this ole guitar.
Yes, it holds more than one surface mar.

Treat her like a lady, always give respect.
Fine wine's with age, her tune flows yet.
I sense you think me of a feeble mind.
But believe me; I'm more than just blind.

No mere words can explain the duty.
Making love to this muse beauty.
Soft notes arise music lingers.
I make it come with just my fingers.

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 10:19

thank you for your support, this poem is based on Picasso's painting, the old guitar player

Wayne Stubbs06 March 2018, 10:49

Absolutely brilliant!! I love this, I jokingly get called Picasso by people because I view things/life in distorted ways from others, like seeing in infrared at some points haha, sorry for the babble but I love the musical tone in this! ????

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 11:04

thank you for your support and comments.

Ru T06 March 2018, 10:53

Beautiful write Lisa. Love it x

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 11:04

thank you for your support and comments

Raelyn Taylor Karson06 March 2018, 11:12

Beautiful poem.

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 11:14

thank you for your support and comment. Please stop again soon

Dean Kuch06 March 2018, 11:45

Hello, Lisa.
Good aabb rhyme scheme featuring primarily true end rhymes.
Some good alliteration scattered throughout, such as "Strumming strings" and "But believe", just to cite a couple of prime examples.
Well penned as always!
~Dean ?

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 11:50

thank you, Dean, your comments are always appreciated, please stop by again soon

Dean Kuch06 March 2018, 12:14

My pleasure as always, Lisa. :)

Lorna06 March 2018, 12:34

hi Lisa,
Beautifully done, I love your phrasing here
brilliant as usual
All my love
Lorna x

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 12:36

Thank you Lorna. Been editing old works edited your poem Lorna

Lorna06 March 2018, 12:38

ooh I'll take a look now x

ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐06 March 2018, 18:01

thank you Lorna

lodigiana07 March 2018, 03:43

Hi Lisa...yet again you have created a wonderful, almost musically poetic piece! i love this and will enjoy rereading it for a long time to come..beautiful work!
Lodigiana x