Poem -
Lady Muse
Nomadic hands for eyes to see.
Chafed palms caress neck on key.
Unlocking refrain a melody arose.
With each lyrical verse, I compose.
Strumming strings with intricate care.
Bring out splendor beyond compare.
Now wood is worn on this ole guitar.
Yes, it holds more than one surface mar.
Treat her like a lady, always give respect.
Fine wine's with age, her tune flows yet.
I sense you think me of a feeble mind.
But believe me; I'm more than just blind.
No mere words can explain a duty.
Making love, to a muse beauty.
Soft notes arise music lingers.
I make it come with just my fingers.
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Comments
Hi PD,
Beautiful work as always!
JP
Hello John, thank you kindly for stopping by could u do me a huge favor? Can you comment on my poem Bane and offer some stars? I know itβs a lot to ask but it drives me nuts I only got one star lol
Poetess, I love guitars... have done since a child. I love how this poem reminds me of the guitar I once had and absolutely loved. I really like this style of writing you've done here... It does the muse justice x
thank you so much Being me. This piece is an older piece that I decided to repost. I've been looking back on my work and decided everything I've written lately seems dull..and not very artistic lol. it started just the other day when I only received one star on my poem Bane...it really can be so dishearting when someone doesn't like your work. You've been so generous with your comments and I appreciate you stopping by. thank you! I haven't received any stars on this yet and I feel like such an anal-retentive person when I don't. Pretty sad that my lot in life is waiting on others to validate my poetry lol but that is what this site is all about.
Hi Poetess... I wouldn't worry about the one star... At least it was a star!Β I never give less than 5 stars as I only give stars if I like the poem (for many varying reasons) and I feel mean giving less than 5....so I give the full 5 (unless I tapped less by mistake). Write the words that flow from your heart and if you are happy with the result it is all that matters.Β
Personally I think this site works best when it is a community. I think it is important that if you post work on here the very least you can do is to read work that others have done... It's what makes this Cosmo thing enjoyable... Interacting with others... Reading their fabulous inking. I know there are an awful lot on here that don't do that... They just post... Maybe there are some who just read and don't really want to get into the giving stars thing... I don't know.
I guess what I am trying to say is, chin up! And carry on writing regardless. Hugs x
Thank you kindlyΒ
This is lovely poetess. I like the way you describe the guitar as a person :)
thank you