Left but not because of rotten
Left but not because of rotten
Where the apple fell,
the fragile fruit tree, still proudly stands.
As a kid I did fall,
but you, placed out both hands.
From a brazon boy I grew,
To an outspoken young man.
Strength exist in numbers,
So all together, we vowed to band.
In the face, of all adversities,
Retreat not, never to have ran.
Live life, to the fullest, was our motto,
And the forbidden, law of the land.
Never known to have faltered,
Into the fire, from the frying pan.
When meditations in order,
no need for a border,
nor fire, shall I fan
you taught me, never to say can’t,
but instead, always say I can,
As yours, my tree shall flourish,
When allowed to grow, from this sand.
Forever nourished to see, the full forest,
not just the tree, is my plan.
The apple that fell, from this tree of life
like you, will triumph once again.
Jim
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a lot of strength in this one jim you rose above all in your path "life" just a battle that can be won through patience and understanding and commitment to rolling on the apple sure was not rotten!
all the best jimmy
tina x
Thanks to both inspiring ladies and fellow poetess, your words echo continuously and with warmness from within, always given from both of your hearts...Two special people, always in gulfed with offering special comments...
Thank you both,
Jim
It's not in contest anymore but still want to say that I like this one very much, it's very deep and it's like it can smell my taste !!
(I also have written a poem about the fruit of the tree of life, geuss I post it next month)
Thank you very much and i will be looking forward to a bite of this apple as well...
Kindest of regards,
Jim
Greetings Susan,
You are a gifted, proud lady who have experienced things in life, that most people, only dare talk about but you, have ventured there and dared to be submissive to the torment, that the venture had attached to it.I can only say, that it is you, that have a whole world of poetry, art and stories, bottled up inside you, just itching and waiting, to be explored by us all and i am glad and proud to know, that now we will have the opportunity to see you and all you have to offer, (shine). What you have bounced back from, is amazing,courageous and full of survival ambitions and lessons,(from you) to be taught to us all, about knowing who we are and what we need to do, in order to never lose sight of what motivates us most in life, in order to stay on, (our own) right track, if life ever throws in our path, (not just one but many) stumbling blocks, to test our beliefs and values...You lady, are the epitome of a hero not only to those that you love are love you but through all of your readers as well...Especially to me....
Take Care,
Susan