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..Lest ye be judged

..Lest ye be judged

Passing beyond this earthly domain towards a new dawning for the fortunate few.
Time having been spent in earth and dust but now awaiting the old order to pass and all things be made new.
We make this journey alone….always alone….
There remains the fear of being forgotten- a fear of trusting and looking out through hooded eyes
towards a future unknown, no longer blinded by material things.
Remembrance slipping away, as we crave to enter a majestic realm where hope and renewal
embalms a weakened spirit…
 In silence awaiting judgement,pleading from within a once earthly  capricious mind- yet now soberingly in awe.
Will the lies of the past envelope me and fade ? or will they be emblazoned on the golden doors for all to see and judge?
Will the faces of the souls I have crushed ruthlessly underfoot ,appear before me…screaming retribution?
Fear of Hell enfolds my shivering soul ..I console myself with thoughts that my lifetime walk through the darkness will help me find my way through the passages of hell,
 But piteous  longing persists for the brilliance of enlightenment to lead me to a luminous  sanctuary,
a brilliance that only Gods spirit can provide- a light that absorbs all the satanic darkness enfolding every new soul breathed into life.
I remember then the  blessed words ‘Thy kingdom come’
And I wait….I fear…..I trust.
 
 
 

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StevieC

I love how you change subject matter so easily and fluidly!! a subject that many would shy away from but although a dark and foreboding subject there is a positive element at the end- well done nice work! xx

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lodigiana

As always your comments and encouragement inspire me- Thank you xx
Lodigiana

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Tony Taylor

Hey there LO!!....A fantastic foray into the one of the most searing questions that humanity has ever had to grapple with..... your use of the English language here makes the write true poetry to the ear.... for even though it is a VERY serious questioning..... the way it is so eloquently presented makes the prose of it MORE than memorable!!..... case in point ~ 'But piteous longing persists for the brilliance of enlightenment to lead me to a luminous sanctuary..".... this kind of poetic prose leaves a POWERFUL mark..... and spurs the reader into "The Questioning" themselves!!...... brilliant work!!..... bravo dear poet sister!!...... Glide On Love!!......T xo ?✳✴☀♥

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lodigiana

I wonder Tony, if you realise how elevating your comments are? I am sure you know how, as poets, we question everything and look for resolution...solution...absolution... in pretty much everything we write...reading your observations is, for me certainly, a HUGE help in trying always to improve on what I am trying to express - you are indeed an inspirational mentor on this site as well as a mighty talent!!! Thank you my friend 
Lodigiana xx

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John Prophet

As Tony says, eloquently presented. You do have a way with words. I liked this very much!

JG

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lodigiana

Thank you so much JG- it's always encouraging receiving comments ..particularly when they are so positive! 
Lodigiana xx

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