Leviathan

I feel so speechless when you come around,Ā
My lungs seem unable to even muster a sound,Ā
Even though weāve been together so long in spirit,Ā
I rarely know whatās on your mind,Ā
My instability can be crippling,Ā
But your kind vibe defies the downsides,Ā
Youāve held my head up yet,
Iām still drowning on the cold concrete,Ā
Ruby red dress that was once cobalt,Ā
Stained by loves unyielding deceit,
Im wading the open waters,Ā
Drifting along our rough waves sinking beneath,Ā
Crashing currents weigh heavily,
upon these poor souls born of the merciless sea,Ā
Freedom cost me everything starting with my sanity,Ā
Washing away what use to be,Ā
You picked my lock but kept the key.Ā
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Wow such an astonishing write. Felt every word. Resonates heaps. Kudos peace and smiles. Your friend TFOTSĀ
Thanks TFOTS! Iāve had this poem written for a while but didnāt know how I wanted it to turn out so I just kinda winged it lol. Iām glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to read. š
This sentence looks simple but quite powerful to me. Well composed.
Appreciate your words Mr. Han! I had a little trouble finishing this one but Iām glad you liked it. Iāve got another in the pipeline so stay tuned!Ā
Hi again Dvon, sorry for spamming, I just wanted to say that reading your poetry is so very inspiring for me and it helps me get though my day sometimes. Also, I wanted to let you know that I'm taking a bit of break over the last few weeks of December for family. Keep being awesome and an inspiration. Peace and smiles to you. The Fish of the SeaĀ
No problem Iām glad my poetry actually helps you! Ironically I have to re read my own work to get a sense of how far Iāve come and the many changes Iāve make both in my work and in life. I hope you have a happy holiday and enjoy the family time!Ā