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Life Of A Love Lost Army Wife

Here today...Gone tommorrow,

Our hearts are breaking filled with sorrow.

I wish we had a chance to say goodbye before you were sent to war to die,

But you left us very suddenly, There were no warning,

Now here without you we are all in mourning.

You were the one true love of my life,

It was a pleasure and an honour to have become your wife.

They years we spent together were filled with such joy,

The days we became parents to our 2 girls and our boy.

You are now an Angel, The brightest star,

Now we can only admire you from afar.

Sleep tight my love, In our hearts you remain,

My journey starts here to walk lifes path of pain,

But I will travel many miles, Air, Land or Sea,

No matter how hard lifes challenges may be,

For I will fight the Cold, The Wind and the Rain,

Cross Oceans, Climb Mountains until we are together again. x

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Jimmy Arnold

Greetings Louise,

Very pretty and honorable poem, allowing your feelings for your beloved to continue on,ensuring him of everlasting love and devotion by the (4) of you, even after he has gone.....But not forgotten..

 Take Care,

Jim 

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Louise Phipps

Hi Jim,

Im sorry to have mislead you with this poem but thankfully my husband is still here. I wrote this for friends who sadly have lost there partners in war.

Thankyou for your lovely comment though.

take care

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Jimmy Arnold

Louise,

(Grand) to hear of your husband, cherish each other to the fullest for life is a very empty world losing some one you've promised to share your complete life with, and even more grander is for the fact of compassion you have, for those that have left home for war with the promise of all the intentions in the world to return and never even had the opportunity to fulfill their promise, leaving behind wives, husbands and even more heart breaking little ones.. I  am sure those that this poem does pertains to, appreciate your compassion. 

Good job,

Jim  

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Louise Phipps

Thankyou ever so much. I am just starting out with the poetry so I hope you continue 2 address my work and criticize where needed. Im so grateful for any support, comments and criticism. x

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Jimmy Arnold

Hey Louise,

There is no criticism in store here for any of these poems; they are very good and sincere. They speak on the deficiencies as well as the triumphs of lifes learned and unlearned lessons as we live it....Great poems.

With regards,

Jimmy 

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