Poem -
LIKE A WHISPER IN THE WIND
Like 11 Pin it 5SHE STANDS BY THE SEAÂ
WITH THE WAVES CRASHING IN
SHE SINGS A SONG OF LONG AGO
HER VOICE IS LIKE AN ANGELÂ
WHEREVER HER VOICE GOES
IT'S LIKE A WHISPER IN THE WIND.ÂÂ Â
AS SHE SINGS IN THE SUNLIGHTÂ
AND THE BLUE SEA AND AT NIGHTÂ
SHE SINGS IN THE MOON LIGHTÂ
ITS LIKE A WHISPER IN THE WIND. Â ÂAS THE BIRDS FLY OVER THE SEA
SHE SINGS A SONG OF LONG AGO
HER VOICE IS LIKE A ANGELÂ
ITS LIKE A WHISPER IN THE WIND.
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Wow this is totally beautiful I love it loads â¤ď¸đšâ¤ď¸
Thank you itâs not the video I wanted but it will do the first video would not go first time I wrote this I lost it and had to rewrite it But Iâm glad you like it I will say good night because in private I have gone over my limit so good night hope everything went well today
Hi GREG!!....this reads like a song lyric (which obviously was your intention)......and could quite easily become a beautiful song......the repetition of the title works VERY well here......helping the flow and the metering all around......ALL STARS!!.....Lovely song lyrics my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thank you Tony yes this is like a song but didnât come out the way I would like it to itâs take me a long time to write itÂ
many times ending up in the garbage
but Ellen Williams is my favorite
she has a voice like an angel has a CD coming out for Christmas I wanted to write a song for her I donât know if I did that here but Iâve told her that she has a voice I can angel and she told me thank you
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I think you've written a lovely song here Greg ...you always put your heart and soul into a write and it really comes through to the reader...well done x
Thank you Marion yes it is a song but I didnât write it like a song it didnât come out the way I liked And I wanted to write a song for Ellen Williams She has such a wonderful voice
Good Morning GregÂ
What a beautiful way to start my day. Reading your delicate words that create a wonderful gentle image to form of a serene heavenly voice in the sea breeze. I agree your lines have a lyrical rhythm to them, that is enchanting to read. Then you top it off with the video. I can see why you believe she sings like an angel. Such wonderful tones and so smooth. A truly gorgeous post my friend. Hats off too you đâď¸âď¸âď¸âď¸âď¸
Gwen x
Good morning GwendolineÂ
thank you I just love Ellen Williams
she has a wonderful voice
she is my favorite right nowÂ
she has a Christmas s cd coming out soon
she also sings in the new movie OO7Â
She is not in the movie just singingÂ
Greg more than wonderful to read and then reread for your poetic quality warrants it.
A touch of poetic class and more than beautifully scribed and elegantly and lovingly presented.
One to take a reader's breath away and takes said reader on an an ethereal like journey, simply carried away on a warm breeze after reading your superb poem.
And that song Now We Are Free of Gladiator sung by Welsh singer Ellen Williams ( a version I hadn't heard till now) is the poetry icing on the poetry cake you have generously served up here my friend.
Thank you Greg and you have made my night here with what you have magnanimously shared.
Stay well and remain poetry enriched and for being the wonderful kind-hearted poet and man you are.
Thank you ShaunÂ
I do like this poem
and I very much like Ellen Williams
She has a wonderful voice
Thank you for reading
Very Beautiful Greg, what a poetic voice you do have
Thank you Max
This is such a delightful post Greg, you got me both smiling and tapping my feet to the tune it created in my head ............................................ :) NÂ
I hope that you watch the video because she is my favorite right now she has a voice like an angel
Listened just now and yes sir, you are absolutely write Greg ....... N
Hi Greg, I know I've been here before and left my calling card, but I just wanted to pop back again and let you know again how much I enjoyed the whole experience ..... Hope you are well sir, Neville :)
Thank you for reading again thank you that means a lot to me you have an awesome day
my pleasure entirely Greg & yes my friend, I'm sure gonna try ... N:)
Like a whisper in the wind
soft and sweet :)
Thank you. Han
Our Dear Greg,
This is one of the best you've ever written, the beautiful onomatopoeic title, inviting the readers in for a trip through your lovely prose. Congratulations, looks like a lot of your fans felt the same way.
All our love,
Linda and Larry xxx
P.S. Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you Linda and Larry
happy Thanksgiving to you too
if you watch the video she has a wonderful voice she has a Christmas CD coming out next week I hope all is well I am doing well
Beautiful poem Greg , I loved the lines " It's like a whisper in the wind " seemed like a great chorus ..... ~RobÂ
Thank you RobertÂ
I hope you listen to herÂ
sing she has a wonderful voice
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