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Like a zombie

Like I zombie that's how I feel
drowning in this fear
Possible skin cancerΒ 
That's not what I wanted to hear

2 weeks I have waitedΒ 
and every day has got longerΒ 
hoping beyond hopeΒ 
that my strength is stronger

and now more waitingΒ 
for the moles to be removed
tests and then more waiting
hopefully my fears will be soothed

well whatever the outcomeΒ 
I put 2 fingers up to you cancer
your a vile horrible diseaseΒ 
your just a chancerΒ 

Should it come to the worst
you won't beat me
with all the srength in the world
I will break free.

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Dean Kuch

"with all the [srength] strength in the world" ... You left off a "t" in "strength", Louise.
You've got the right attitude. If you are able to stay positive, which I believe you can and will based on what I've just read in your poem, you will come through with flying colors.
Good luck to you!
~Dean

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Keith Fitzsimons

Very personal and deep.

If this really is about you, I hope things work out for you

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Tony Taylor

Hey LOUISE!!..... the positivist at the conclusion of this piece is beyond admirable... it's the kind of write the promotes hope and inspiration for so many on this site that are dealing with similar difficulties!..... the formatting and perfect adherence to the a,b,a,b, rhyme scheme throughout makes theΒ write flow VERY well dear poet sister!!......PINNED for perfection!!...... and God bless you for sharing this with us all!....... your cyber-friend and admirer!!......T xo β™₯β™₯

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