Poem -
living a lie
On my own.
Alone.
Don't know,
Can't say,
Can't understand,
Can no longer pray.
One day it was grand,
Now shattered to pieces.
Alone I stand.
I'm drowning myself.
Won't give in,
Won't try.
Discern It's a lie.
And i stand alone,
Too broken to cry.
As one with my lie.
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Comments
Stilligo I really liked the layout and structure of this write. The short intense lines gave it punch and impact, sharp and emotive. I think so many people will be able to relate to the message in this one. Well written. Loved the end line, very strong. A vote and nomination from me:)
thank you very much. I appreciate this very much because I'm working on getting some of my poetry published.
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI
thank you so much. I can't believe this is actually happening! I never knew my poetry was good enough to be nominated!