Poem -
LONELY AGIN
Lonely agin its
Like sad song
Playing on the radio
The rain that
Floods my room
At night and the wind
That blows it away
Over the ocean flys
A bird from the heart
Of life intill the death
Lock of hell lonely
Agin rose in room
Rainbows in the sky
A unforgettable word
that the ocean Washed away
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AwwwI am pleased you are not really lonely again now Greg ❤️💙❤️
thank you Jill
this a rewrite
form 3 years ago
on cosmo but
i originally
wrote this back
in 1977 i wrote
so many poems
from 1976-1978
but lost most of them
Awww that was awful loosing them.. aI would hate that 🥲💙
GREG!!....there is a sad brilliance in this....do you mind if I do a quick something to illustrate my point? ~ ?........Here it is~~~!! (smiles) ~
~ "Lonely again,
It's like a sad song
Playing
On the radio...
The rain
That floods my room
At night
And the wind
That washes it away...
Over the ocean
Fly's
A bird from the heart
Of life...
Until,
The death-lock from Hell
Again,
Rose in a room of rainbows
Of colors,
In the sky
A world that the ocean
Had washed
Away...
Greg Etsell
YOUR words brother......just broke differently.......Love your stuff brother......PEACE.......T xo : )
Thank you Tony but that’s how I wrote it back in 1977 thank you for your analyzing thank you very much I don’t think I’ll ever change it I would like to add to it but I can’t seem to find the words to add to it
Don't need to add anything man......Just look closely at the 3 changes I made....and you'll see what I mean about how intimately powerful your stuff is!!........Smiles........Later brother!!........Peace......T xo : )
Greg, a sad and melancholy write but time changes everything.
Changes everything and everyone hopefully for the better.
Your poem really hits home that feeling of loneliness we have in our lives.
Thank you for sharing and I hope things will or have changed for you.